 realmedia
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Date: October 19, 2007 @ 8:15 PM
domestic violence is a fucked up thing to go thru~ and all i got to say is leave get out of it fast~before something terrible happens~ >>> john
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 moam
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Date: October 20, 2007 @ 12:51 AM
Very nice sound  I love your vocals of course  I'm not too fond of that "slayer" electric guitar  but still, doesn't take TOO much away from the track  I love that piano track in the break, sounds really beautiful... Seriously though, the high point of all your tracks have been your vocals, which is great  "You ain't fuckin' there!" I love that anger I do think that the "You're not there" could be recorded a little better, like maybe standing further away from the mic when you yell it... That would make it sound a lot more clear  Seriously though, I really dig this track, besides the slayer guitar But again, great fucking voice dude
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baiko
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Date: October 20, 2007 @ 5:53 AM
well... after not woman enough (or something...), this is some turnover
you have good fukin' voice! but it needs some sort of compressor on it (now it's only a production issue ) or some hall fx.
music is nice - piano lays fine, bass und beat are great... maybe some more layers will be nice.
good work here dude! really!
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TheElf
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Date: October 20, 2007 @ 7:44 AM
 Cool track. Defintely dig the beat with that piano loop. And yes, your voice is good & works well with the atmosphere & context of the song.
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 TOA2007
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Date: October 20, 2007 @ 8:01 AM
Very cool indeed! I luv the Slayer guitar  I Can relate, Believe me I had my share of girl/Stockers & fruity woman abusing the law, lying & trying to put me away, I think this song will tap into the emotions of some, good job and as always luv the vocals I dig it! and ladies there's a lot of great woman out there, so this dont mean all of you :grin:
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NoRentJoseph
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Date: October 20, 2007 @ 11:44 AM
great song man.
Love that bass line
The piano is
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aorpete
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Date: October 20, 2007 @ 6:20 PM
Cool Track!!! 
I really like the vocals!!! 
In one or two places on the verse they slightly waver from key... (only slightly!!!) but... the performance is really HOT!!! 
I really do love GROOVE on this... an all the keyboard parts are a real bonus!!!
AWESOME JOB BUDDY!!! 
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Bluenevus
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Date: October 20, 2007 @ 7:12 PM
wow, what a cool bass groove.
It is obvious that you put some work into that drum work also. The keys are right on. I'm with MOAM on the slayer. I'm guilty of using slayer a couple of times. Most have the same response so I try to just stay away from it.
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 ShadowMom
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Date: October 20, 2007 @ 10:44 PM
Your vocals have something that is often missing today-- character. And that's a very good thing; the emotion really shines through in your music. I like the lyrics, too, and the spoken part adds a lot to this track. Playlisted... 
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Rodrica
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Date: October 21, 2007 @ 4:50 PM
I like the way you really make a serious statement to us all by using a very funky groove to grab everyone's attention. Love the piano parts and the bass - dramatic with great lyrics. Great stuff
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 Ghostie
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Date: October 22, 2007 @ 12:33 AM
I like songs about serious subjects.. making quite a statement with this Great track Jon!
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MultiMike
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Date: October 22, 2007 @ 2:20 PM
Like the way the bass and drums hold this song tightly together, your vocals are very clear and the lyrics are to the point. The piano fills add interest but the sequenced synth towards the end is a nice touch.
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 HenriRoger
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Date: October 23, 2007 @ 2:22 PM
This is a good song .
I have a few suggestions .
I think the best things here besides the lyrics are your voice , the bass , and the drums .
The piano part is a bit "happy" compared to the general mood .
The bridge and it's melodic lines is breaking too much the first mood of the song .
So this can be a fantastic track with more focus on the main idea ...
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miraclemaker
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Date: October 23, 2007 @ 3:12 PM
sounds cool like the driving  beat and mechanical keyboard sound, sorta reminds me of NIN only no aggrevated depressing moans - not to pro on cursing in music myself, but i can relate to the bad relationship situation man  
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Engine11RDenny
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Date: October 23, 2007 @ 3:45 PM
The beat is a winner dude. I really love the crunchy distortion echos and the far to close synth in the intermissions  "now i will get out of this todaaaaaay" really like the forced bass notes goin' out that's what it's all about  Lot of inspiration and honesty in your writing awesome vox all the way  and hey we all love ya john 
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ebarbarella
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Date: October 26, 2007 @ 2:39 PM
very nice! it has a dark feel to it! i love it, playlisted
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NosmoKing
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Date: October 30, 2007 @ 1:54 PM
Tight and great grove. Clearly you had something to say and made your point.
re: Slayer - Heck I used to use it all the time..loved it
Well done!
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ViciousKitty
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Date: November 23, 2007 @ 9:59 AM
Love that intro !Very well put together.Great voice!!The melody fits perfect.I could almost hear this track with some heavy grunge guitar!Thats just me(LOL) you know as a guitarist!Anyway awesome performance.Vocals are great.A bit of clipping on the vox level but man awesome job!
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