 realmedia
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Date: July 8, 2007 @ 4:17 PM
this is a song i wrote a few years ago~
and its a bit ruff at the end of the song~ but since i have not posted any songs in a long ass time~ here ya go~
hope ya like it~  
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 Distilled1
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Date: July 8, 2007 @ 4:22 PM
I dig it man ... the drums... no but the vocals are great as the lyrics as well as the guitar very Nirvana eskkk (sic) 
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 dsindel
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Date: July 8, 2007 @ 5:34 PM
good pop tune here, levels are a bit hot and clipping on my system but it's the song that counts and this has good hooks
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tsand20175
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Date: July 8, 2007 @ 7:22 PM
yes, nice songwriting skills. love the guitar parts. nice job.
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 ShadowMom
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Date: July 8, 2007 @ 7:52 PM
It has been way too long. I like the vocals particularly...it's nice to hear singing with a little character now and then. And yeah, it's a little rough at the end, but the rest is oh so  
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Spaghetti
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Date: July 9, 2007 @ 6:26 AM
Nice job on not having an annoying voice like a lot of others on here! >_>
I liked the simplicity of this track. I don't think you you should do anything to this track besides maybe overdub the vocals to make them louder and more understandable. Really good job. =D
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MonnieB
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Date: July 13, 2007 @ 8:56 PM
Whoa! Yummy vocals!! Nice track altogether, actually... Very nice guitar and the drum track fits in wonderfully... I was pleasantly surprised... 
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ebarbarella
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Date: July 13, 2007 @ 9:19 PM
wow yeah very very nice, i love the vocals and guitar!  playlisted
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farfor44
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Date: July 22, 2007 @ 8:58 PM
 everything fits together
very well here!!! nicely done.
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DeadraveN
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Date: July 30, 2007 @ 1:34 PM
heheh nice little ending there.. 
man, you have a great voice!! very fitting for the style of the song as well...
Playing was spot on as well.. I'd love to hear this one a little more fleshed out, maybe with some fills for the drums and a little fuller instrumentation.. it already makes for a great 'captured moment' but a full on production could be awesome as well..
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Rodrica
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Date: August 1, 2007 @ 6:54 AM
That strong beat works well - very catchy. Great vocals/guitar - this would be fantastic performed live - reckon it would really get the audience going! Very well written song
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 independentm...
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Date: August 8, 2007 @ 8:52 PM
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evansorchid
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Date: September 15, 2007 @ 10:19 PM
Nice sound on the drums.
The acoustic guitar could use a bit of EQ tweeking. Maybe bring down the mids a touch.
Vocals sound great. Excellent melody line and cool hook.
I really like the overall large room ambience.
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TOA2007
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Date: October 4, 2007 @ 8:16 AM
Great vocals! luving guitars, bass and def drums. nice feel to this, Awesome!
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Jennae
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Date: October 7, 2007 @ 9:26 PM
I agree nice sound on the drums.. I agree about the acoustic as well ..
is this you singing..w00t! yeah.. has a little early neil young flavor to it..
good little groove ya got going on here.. lyrics are good too
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NickSawyer
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Date: October 7, 2007 @ 9:51 PM
Wow man this is wow
The best I've heard in a while
I love the guitar and vocals... heck, I love the whole thing.
This is perfection 
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 bigfootofget...
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Date: October 8, 2007 @ 11:42 AM
I don't want remains fo' me to say that hasn't already been said  vocals were perfect 
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aorpete
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Date: October 9, 2007 @ 7:36 PM
Who's on VOX??? 
Likin it very much!!!
Some bouncy-bass-line would give this a bit more edge... just enough to boost the spark!!! 
I definitly agree with Jennae about the Neil Young flavour!!!
Very cool matey!!!
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jde
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Date: October 10, 2007 @ 12:53 PM
loving this nice groove..... music with a message ))
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ChillinBuzz
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Date: October 11, 2007 @ 11:13 AM
No bass! travesty! just kidding
Simple effective chords, solid playing there (the ending is something you could always edit in a studio environment so no loss of marks there!) - Dig the vocals too, give it some "ummph" when you sing, there's a cool tone in your voice I'd like to hear more from.
Good stuff, John 
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GeneHilbert
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Date: October 11, 2007 @ 12:05 PM
Kewl Tune - nice sketch.
Now get busy on the full production recording......... LOL
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 Ghostie
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Date: October 18, 2007 @ 10:53 AM
Wow! you got a very nice voice 
This is a catchy tune.. got me swaying
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miraclemaker
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Date: October 23, 2007 @ 8:42 AM
cool tune  - very nice 
and all the time im saying this would rip played on electric 
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NosmoKing
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Date: October 24, 2007 @ 3:05 PM
Yes.. I can hear this with a full band behind you!
Cheers
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mandolinlady
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Date: October 31, 2007 @ 4:50 PM
You really do have a fabulous vocal  
Great song writing, love the guitar you have lots of talent
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NoRentJoseph
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Date: November 5, 2007 @ 3:14 PM
Great writing John. I'll take this rough demo as the sketch it is.
I like it
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Mojosnake
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Date: November 7, 2007 @ 1:03 PM
me likey man...
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Bluenevus
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Date: November 12, 2007 @ 7:27 AM
John, you're on my watchlist...how do these great tracks keep passing me by..!
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ViciousKitty
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Date: November 29, 2007 @ 10:22 PM
Nice drumming sound.The guitar recording needs a bit of work.A bit hot on the level. Great feel in the vox.Nice style!!!
Good job on the vocal bends!Sing it guy!!!
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